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Reviewer: laia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Dear friend, you know I really like how your portrayals of Angela. I like how you see and describe her. You are good with details, comedy, romanticism and tension.

I laughed hard with some lines there, peewee, philly etc... :)

To my taste, his declaration was too rushed up, because I like it to last and come by steps. I love your looong stories.

But very romantic and sweet as you do so well :).

Write more!

Reviewer: jmr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2010 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2

There's also a touch of "Adman Micelli" in this, pd. Your story is so romantic, pd! It made me smile - cute, witty, I could visualize the physical comedy as if it were a real episode. Nicely done, my girl. But watch your pronouns, when to use 'his' & 'her'; otherwise your imagination has produced another little gem for us to enjoy. Thanks!

Reviewer: OakHillsDrive Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2010 08:24 am Title: Chapter 2

AAAhhhhhhh! What a perfect way to wake up this morning. A little romance, a little lie, a lot of kiss. O la la. I love your imagination and am so glad to read from it again.

Reviewer: TonyandtheDreamtones Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2010 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like your story !!! Great job !

Author's Response: :) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: GoldenGirl_Sherry Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2010 11:38 am Title: Chapter 2

What a cute story!!! I really enjoyed reading it!!!:)

Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to read it sherry. :)

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