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Reviewer: jmr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2010 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1

What a satisfying story! Love comes full circle for the Bauer-Micelli clan. Thanks for a truly fine story, Sherry & I hope you enjoy your birthday lunch!! Great job. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you and I did. :)

Reviewer: prettydynamic Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2010 06:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Few couples keep their love till they're old and gray. It's nice to see you wrote Tony and Angela's love that way.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

I love your poem!! :)

Reviewer: OakHillsDrive Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really love this Sherry. I know this might sound weird, but I can hear "Tony's" voice in my head as I read it. You have his phrasings down, Girl. Great job.

Author's Response:
Thank you

It doesn't sound weird at all. When I write I "hear" their voices in my head too.
Do you think we need help? LOL
Thank you!!!:)

Reviewer: Anneli Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a very nice little story Sherry, I like it a lot. The dialogue for Tony is really right on...it sounds just like him. Great job! :)

Oh, just a suggestion... "Well when I 1st applied to..." "...all the wonderful memories and moments the 2 of you can experience together."

Your writing/stories would flow better and read more smoothly if you spelled number words out. Just a suggestion. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)

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