You're developing this story at a good pace, Sherry, not hurrying us through the Kathleen-era.  It's entirely realistic that there were many encounters among the family members & Kathleen, so it's entertaining to see what your imagination conjures up for us!  A good read, waiting patiently for more :-)

Author's Response:

Well I hope your patience pays off because I am at a complete loss at how to proceed.  The writing block bug has me by the throat. LOL

Thanks for your review. :)

Waaahhhhh! :(

Seeing Kathleen's name is so upsetting. When Tony went to the office to look for Angela I was like "oh they will be the perfect couple for the commercial" thne suddenly kathlee's name flashed, "oh rats, what's she doing here?"

hahaha. as i read the thoughts of angela i realize they were exactly the same ones i felt the moment i realize kathleen was there.  

i could kill the client. hahaha

Can I just say that the part where Angela realizes that you know who is there, is exactly how I felt when I heard what her client says at the end of the chapter.  "NOOOOOO!!!!!"  Can't he see what we all see?  That he's looking at the wrong couple?  It almost made me nauseous.  I'm not writing this to hurt your feelings.  Just the opposite.  It's a sign of a great writer when you make us feel, really feel for the characters we love so much.

Author's Response:

No worries. It made me nauseous too. ;)

Thanks for your review!!!:)